Jahbrill Washington
Eng100 03/28/17 Saturday Morning Saturday morning roughly around 8 am , waking up to the smell of turkey bacon in the air. My eye fighting to stay close but if this was a school day the shoe would of been on the other foot. Guess as a little boy it's just natural to get up early on Saturday. As my eyes opening my first seen was towards the television. My favorite cartoon was on Dragon Ball Z. I was tempted to watch the episode but knowing my big brother was up from all the sound he made running down the stair. I know its was matter of time my share of bacon was going to be gone. Around this time my cousin was staying with us. Him and his dad had disagree so my mom let him stay with us. She was big on family and sticking together. We all sitting at the wooden round table. Passing the half of gallon orange juice. Mom did her thing in the kitchen. She made her famous blueberry pancake , turkey bacon , cheese eggs , and cheese grits with extra butler and shrimps.. We had some small conversations between each bite of food. My brother was the first one asking for seconding like always. Surprisingly my brother Jahbar wasn’t fat but he can eat you out of a home. Jahbar and I had the same mom and dad. We was four years apart. A lot of people said we look like. I never saw it until later when i got older. Jahbar had long black curly hair. Most of the time his hair was braid back like Allen Iverson. He was pretty tall for his age. A lot of my mom's friends call him Rick Fox. At that time I did not know who he was. My mom always the last one to sit down and enjoy her cooking. Always wondering did she love her meal as much we do. Everyone will get seconding but her. My older cousin T Bone was the first to get done and clean off his plate. We barely spend time with him because he work schedule. I assume he was saving up to get his own apartment. Today was his day off on both jobs and today was game night. Assignment page Hiraeth Narrative
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Sabatino ill. I am glad to see you are staying on TOP of your writing. And this is a strong first draft! My checklist: Is this a narrative? Yes Use strong description? Yes Shows action? Yes Scenes build the story? Yes Illustrate a longing for home? Gett
2/3/2017 07:54:41 am
I am glad to see you are staying on TOP of your writing. And this is a strong first draft! My checklist for this stage in the process:
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